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The scent of a summer storm
Still lingers
In the roots of your hair
Breathing lullabies
And quiet love songs
To which your fingers dance
Across my skin
The ocean in your eyes
Grows deeper
And more treacherous
To my soul
Than any waters were to ships
Yet you sail calmly by
Towards a sunrise
Or a sunset
Or just a sky half full
[half empty]
Of light and shadow
Can you catch a star
In the palm of your hand?
Can you mould it
Into something new
Change it
Into a minute
Or an hour
Or even just a second?
Or are your hands
Already too heavy
Filled with bitumen
From when you fell
On the road
In the heat
And the damp
Of that summer storm?
Still lingers
In the roots of your hair
Breathing lullabies
And quiet love songs
To which your fingers dance
Across my skin
The ocean in your eyes
Grows deeper
And more treacherous
To my soul
Than any waters were to ships
Yet you sail calmly by
Towards a sunrise
Or a sunset
Or just a sky half full
[half empty]
Of light and shadow
Can you catch a star
In the palm of your hand?
Can you mould it
Into something new
Change it
Into a minute
Or an hour
Or even just a second?
Or are your hands
Already too heavy
Filled with bitumen
From when you fell
On the road
In the heat
And the damp
Of that summer storm?
Bleh. I suppose the only way I'll improve my writing is to keep practising. So I'll be pumping out garbage like this for a while///
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The first two stanzas captivated me.